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The glue is drying up,
The pieces are falling apart

Why wont they stick together,
The fragments of my heart

One by one they fall
Tears gush for every piece
Slicing at my soul
As I see the glue slowly decrease

The vortex of kinship
Once swirled them together
But the gross white paste
Can't last any more weather

It brought to my knees on my strongest day
The voices of the past slowly turn to gray
I hear their whispers, the voices cutting at my ears
I break out and protest, the cover of my fears
Score two for The 100 Theme Challenge! :D
#76 "Broken Pieces"

This piece is a collab between me and a good friend named Marlee. I know it's not my best piece ever, but I think it is sweet. A good going away present as I switch schools.

Tell me what you think!

~critiquing is always welcome!~
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PhotoPhantom15's avatar
i do really like this poem...i like some of the words u used for imagery like "Slicing at my soul" just brilliant!!! <33