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Just Another Night

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Oh little star
No I don't know who you are
But you captured my heart
And now you're tearing it apart

Sexy long brown hair
Simply flowing everywhere
Oh please, wont you spare
My heart?

See you 'cross the room
You're so pretty, I'd assume
You got a lover too
But, I don't mind

Singing out that song
You're a karaoke bomb
I'd listen all night long
If you'd let me

Come on little beauty
Wont you  take me for a spin
don't know what you travel in
But it's the wrong car

No- don't know where you came from
No- don't know who you are
No- doesn't even matter
Oh- cause your spectacular
Wow- you're so hot it's crazy
Damn- those brown eyes amaze me
No- have to do this right
Hey- Be my date tonight?

Woooooooooooo!!

You flashed those pearly whites
Took my breath- I saw the light
And asked God is it right
To be so pretty?

Then you took me by the hand
Said "saw you staring man
It's okay I understand
I get it"

"I get off at four
Just wait there by the door
We'll run away and floor
It in your car

I said anything for you
You cocked your head and looked confused
Waved your hand in front of me too
"are you alright?"

I shook my head and found
There was nobody around
Drank my booze and forgot to pay
Then fanaticized my day.
"Great."
Something silly to start off the new year =P

Tell me what you think! I kind of just came up with it on the spot after seeing the song title "Paper Star" by some group on myspace. I find this one a bit embarassing but I'm learning not to care =P

I appreciate any and all comments, so please hit me with any critiques\anything you'd like to say! :) :heart:
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Reina-ali's avatar
:DDD By the end, I was definitely smiling~ I very much like the story-like flow! And the way you arranged it was intriguing, very different!