literature

A Pain Indescribable

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When one comment turns dusk into day
My heart stops beating
There was nothing I could do
My entire body weighted down with those words
Screams of protest scratched at my throat
Clawing to clamber out
But my mouth, stone
As I drown in confusion
I cannot fight it
I don't even attempt
As your words push me down ever further
Into the murky depths
One thought omnipotent
How could you…
with those words
you hurt me more than you could ever know...

~Critique as you like~
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PhotoPhantom15's avatar
another job well done!! <3 u r turning out to b one of m favorite poets on DA! <333